Comments : The Gift of Desperation

  • 17 years ago

    by Matthew Betts

    Hi Storm

    I really enjoyed reading this piece of work.. I know alot of people on this site refer to another persons poems explaining their life, this poem didnt completely explain my life, but if i may quote...

    **I staggered to my senses
    and stumbled to my feet
    to put my life together
    bit by bit, piece by piece.**

    This part of your poem really is the picture of my life at this moment, i am trying to build from a hard lived life now and your poem only enspires me to try harder.

    So storm, i thank you for such a beautiful write.

    Matt

  • 17 years ago

    by QuietStorm

    Wow i'm honored matt, and I tip my hat to you as well. It takes courage to change, and thats what you have. You can do it matt. I'm rootin 4 ya.

  • 17 years ago

    by FELTON PHILLIPS

    Nice work. Great message. Great flow. I like your style.

  • 17 years ago

    by QuietStorm

    Thank you

  • 17 years ago

    by mohamad aref numan

    I like the way u express urself

  • 17 years ago

    by QuietStorm

    Thank u