My admiration

by Tylor   Sep 16, 2007


The admiration,
From me to you,
Is now a burning desire,
Of what I should do..

Protruding swiftly,
In the midst of night,
Is your unconditional love,
What a wonderful delight..

Feeling these feelings,
When I see your beautiful face,
It's a warm sensation,
That cannot be erased.

Touching your skin,
Warm, soft, and striking,
As if to touch an angel,
Its of my liking.

Looking into your dark, entrancing eyes,
It arrests my soul,
Makes a sharp quiver through my spine,
I feel out of control.

Telling you how much I care,
Is the hardest thing to do,
Because even words cannot explain,
How much I love You.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Very very very cute! i loved it! you must really love her. amazing way to show it. :) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Amazing poem! seems u have alot of love for her =)
    well written flowed really well n pulled me in!!!

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    "Looking into your dark, entrancing eyes,
    It arrests my soul,
    Makes a sharp quiver through my spine,
    I feel out of control."

    ^^It left me speechless, which is such a hard thing to do..lol, amazing job!

    Brooke<3