Comments : My admiration

  • 17 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    "Looking into your dark, entrancing eyes,
    It arrests my soul,
    Makes a sharp quiver through my spine,
    I feel out of control."

    ^^It left me speechless, which is such a hard thing to do..lol, amazing job!

    Brooke<3

  • 17 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Amazing poem! seems u have alot of love for her =)
    well written flowed really well n pulled me in!!!

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Very very very cute! i loved it! you must really love her. amazing way to show it. :) 5/5