Can I compare you to a summer's night?

by Chris   Sep 16, 2007


Can I compare you to a summer's night?
The cool breeze a comforting sigh.
Wretched heat losing the everlasting fight;
To the day the sun must say goodbye.
Winters chill is far too cold for my skin,
It's bite too strong for my fingers.
Hands grasping at the body, pressing in.
Freezing claw against the flesh lingers;
Waiting for the soothing summer touch
To ease the pain which absence forgot.
Spring only a useless crutch
To restrain the awful winter's rot.
But summer night is never gone;
You are always beside me come dawn.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Ilu

  • 17 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Your writting is grow and becoming more discriptive(sp?) as time rolls on, all I can say is way to go chris
    you know I love you more then ever,
    Love Auna
    p.s when are you going to change it to say that you sixten not 15

  • 17 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Wow, the wording was just amazing and the flow was flawless...nice job!

    Brooke<3