That was so sad, it was powerful and deep with alot of emotion, i thought it was well written and you did a wonderful job on the imagery.
love always,
Tara-Kay
x

Tis a very good poem jenna, i can tell you put so much emotion into this one, love the flow and choice in wording, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming babe!!!

"Dancing in angst, the moonlight silhouettes me on the wall;
And tonight, there isn`t anyone around to catch me when I fall;
Falling back to the alcohol and drugs, the blood drips in the sink;
I`m letting myself go, I`m not afraid to fall off of the brink."

You are one of my idol's on this site i have to admit!
The way you write is always so amazing, the way you tell a story yet manage to keep up such a flawless flow
Excellent poem!
5/5
*Gem*