Comments : Far away gran

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    "I feel so close to you
    but your not really here
    it feels like I'll lose you
    thats my biggest fear"

    I can so relate to this, I feel this way right now. and I know many people will understand and relate to this. This was such a strong way to start this poem.

    "but the truth is that if you left
    I'd have no one else to get me through "

    So honest so true, and yet again I can relate.

    "i love you gran i really do
    i love you more than i could say
    and i hate feeling this close
    to a gran so far away."

    So sweet, this poem is one of the sweetest I've ever read!