Comments : I love you,you love her

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    That was great.
    It was a sad and emotional write. The flow was flawless & the word usage was good. :)

    "You know you still love her.
    You try to hide it,but you do."

    ^^
    Love those lines. Amazing job. Overall: 5.5 (:

    Sorry that it's taken me so long to return the comments.
    -- Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I liked this a lot. Very emotional, which I always love. :] The flow was good, and the wording well done.

    I enjoyed the read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Okay. i friggin loved this. filled with so much depth and emotion throughout the whole piece. i adore that ending..such intensity that it hits the reader like a slap in the face..beautifully done.