by Cooper Sep 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
***Another hopeless romantic poem. |
by Lenny
I love this, its love, its magical metaphors, its wonderful transitions between them, its beautiful.... |
I'm speechless and that doesn't happen often. |
The Feeling that I get here is that you are in Love with a fairy and yet....... the grounded and earthy images you have concocted make it all believeable and quite realistically touching..... |
by Miu
Wowawiwow! What are you saying about being beaten in love category like ahh this is so much better then my work. :) Imagery was just incredible and keep my mind in the poem with the pictures flashing in my head. Perfectly written, everything that should have been there was and i loved your metaphors, unique. Ahh just amazing! |
Wow, this is simply amazing! Whole poems has mind-blowing imagery and it is excellently written from the beginning to the end. Every stanza contains great wording and outstanding atmosphere. I like all metaphors that you add in your pieces, you can make each poem truly effective. |