Wow, this is simply amazing! Whole poems has mind-blowing imagery and it is excellently written from the beginning to the end. Every stanza contains great wording and outstanding atmosphere. I like all metaphors that you add in your pieces, you can make each poem truly effective.
Well done, 5/5 from me

Wowawiwow! What are you saying about being beaten in love category like ahh this is so much better then my work. :) Imagery was just incredible and keep my mind in the poem with the pictures flashing in my head. Perfectly written, everything that should have been there was and i loved your metaphors, unique. Ahh just amazing!
Keep it up!
5/5

The Feeling that I get here is that you are in Love with a fairy and yet....... the grounded and earthy images you have concocted make it all believeable and quite realistically touching.....
Whatever your stated boyish proclivities may be, I perceive a deeply Sweet Heart...Strive on.....

I'm speechless and that doesn't happen often.
This was just more than amazing.
It was truly brilliant.
I loved it.
I'm adding you to my favorites.
5/5
-Heather

I love this, its love, its magical metaphors, its wonderful transitions between them, its beautiful....
I could hug you happy and to a state where you would write this poem again...and it would be the best :) Not makiing sense lol