Such a perfect poem! Truely! I loved it throughout and you have such a gift of rhythm, that it amazes me! Wow I loved this poem so much! I mustshow this poem to someone. Keep writing like this cause it's a strength of yours! Great job!

Hello,
This poem is beautifully penned! The flow and words were perfect, and they drew me in, the moment I read them.
I wouldn't change anything!
Keep it up, and 5/5!

Hatori

P.S. Anime really is great as well! ^_^