by selene Sep 16, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Waiting in agony |
Unique and intruiging, this piece is top notch. it captures the readers' attention, keeps them focussed with clever rhym schemes, and concludes perfectly, finally revealing the culprit. this is a very uncommon topic for a poem, but you used it extremely well. 5/5 and higher if it was possible! keep it up! |