by ashlyn Sep 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
They say to watch what you do because the past will come back and haunt you, |
by Sourav
Ashlyn... I appreciate the effort and the thoughts you've put in this poem. But I think it could have been structured in a better way. At time it feels little wayward. This is only my personal opinion. So take no offense. Otherwise it's a well written one. Keep on writing... Cheers! |