The bat

by cory   Sep 16, 2007


Waiting

My whole life I've been waiting

Searching

Always searching through the night

Darkness

Surrounds the center of my being

Everything

Nothing is as it seems

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  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Short but very meaningful. Such a powerful expression of emotions displayed. 5/5, Em x

  • 17 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    This was awesome man!! =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    So many meaningful words in so little place. Very enjoyful and powerful! An amazing write!
    5/5 Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I liked the simple straightforward style of this piece and the title certainly encourages you to think beyond the words. To my mind it seems that this poem could be a little longer as it feels there is more to be said yet it also seems to say enough.

  • 17 years ago

    by Internal Hatred

    Great job.

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