Have you ever

by willowoman   Sep 17, 2007


Have you ever
been hert so bad
were you just feel numb
you don't even want to get out of bed
and deal with this world of hate
have you ever
just given up
have you ever
just taking a few pills
because thats just how much the pain kills
have you ever
felt so dead inside
have you ever
thought of suicide
as the only way out
have you ever
lived my life
have you ever
felt the same way too
have you ever spent a min. in my shoes
If you haven't
then tell me why you judge me as you do

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  • 17 years ago

    by Josh

    That was a really good poem. and I agree people can judge others to much....keep it up ;)

  • 17 years ago

    by Simply Josh

    Nice, sad, expressive poem. If i was to make one criticism, it would be the spelling and grammar. Other than that, good job.
    cheers, josh

  • 17 years ago

    by cory

    Wow loved it. it was so sad, so dark. def my syle.=)5/5

    Cory