by Brittney Follett Sep 17, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Tall, brown haired, browned eyed, he's handsome. |
by Cella Bella
First stanza, third line; "You would think he was god in a human form." I think it would sound better if you took the [a] out or put it before god instead... just my opinion though. |
Very effective and unique. The imagery in whole poem is excellently created and the choice of words is great. You created haunting and captivating atmosphere through the poem. |