Very effective and unique. The imagery in whole poem is excellently created and the choice of words is great. You created haunting and captivating atmosphere through the poem.
I admire your talent and creativity.
5/5 from me, keep up!

First stanza, third line; "You would think he was god in a human form." I think it would sound better if you took the [a] out or put it before god instead... just my opinion though.
Anyway, I loved this poems story-like form. It was very capitivating and I couldn't stop reading. The imagery was amazing. 5/5

marcella