by Christina Yap Sep 17, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
It was just last March |
by Marc Ortiz
I really like this stanza.. |
by Crystal Gaze
Adding a certain form would help the flow, but that is completly your choice. I think the way you write is unique. But nothing like a bit of critique.:) |
by Cella Bella
I think this would be better read in long stanzas, instead of small fragmets. The story to it was really good. 5/5 |