by cory
Wow deep. i liked this poem a lot i could tell that your a talented poet.5/5 |
by Nix
Very sad poem, you expressed emotions greatly. I don't like second stanza but rest of it is fantastic. You created very strong atmosphere, and the way you described your feelings is superb. It deserves 5/5, well done! |
Beautiful, so emotional and sad. you can really express yourself in your words. |
All ican say is u sure do have a gr8 way with words...i can only hope that ill be able to put my emotions into deep and meaningful poems like you do:D |
by Corinne
Very touching and heartfelt. |
by Gasttlee
This is a very emotional poem. 5/5 It's very good, though. |
by Angie
You have expressed a lot of emotion in this write. Very heartfelt, many people question the whys of when someone leaves us in this way, we tend to get angry when we need them and they're not there and thats when we question it.... well done D, well done. |
by Aussie
Amazing!! |
by Tabitha
Wow! this was very deep. I'm impressed! keep up the great work! |
by Fluffy
"Heaven has taken the man I called my dad... |