This poem is beautiful, so sad and yet the way you ended it, the way you have written it gives it the feel of joy through the sadness, the kinda joy you feel when you miss someone but know there in a better place. =) really loved reading this.

WOW that was a very nice way to say goodbye and remember the dad that you loved all your life, wonderfully written and wording was great, ye t it was sad and it's always sad to lose someone close to you, and you spoke in the write there will be no more pain , great job on thei one ,,, and welcome back ,,,,,,,your friend Tracy d 5/5

The blood of a poets broken heart shows up well on the white page with words that show the cracks and depths of that wounded heart. Keep up the good works.

Great dedication poem. 5/5.

Great dedication poem. 5/5.

Such a lovely tribute to your dad, I'm sorry for your loss, 5/5