This is a very sad poem but ending is very effective and positive. Great message it this piece and I like your choice of words. You also expressed emotions excellently. Well done! 5/5

This was a wonderful poem
Remember live life be happy
~COnfused Queen~

This poem is amazing.
You have a real talent.
Keep It up.
I'm going to read more of your poetry :D
Love x

Short but well written and a joy to read...5/5

Please keep writing and I will keep reading