by Veamm Sep 17, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Fake god |
by Jenna
I like this...i believe the same as well. |
by Nix
Incredible and very true poem. It has excellent atmosphere and you expressed your emotions greatly. Well done! |
The rhyme scheme was a little |
by Cella Bella
The rhyme scheme was alittle off in the last stanza, but besides that the flow was perfect. I reall enjoyed the concept and your point of view. Great read/write. 5/5 |
by Kristina
I actually really like this a lot, cause I dont' believe in god either. This poem was really good and I liked the rhyming. Nicely done! 5/5 |