Comments : Rain [Haiku]

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    honestly im not familiar with haiku type of poetry. so i can't tell if it is good or not..for this one well its pretty obvious..that the topic is all about rain..

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    This was a really good poem. Good choice of words. Very well written. You seem to be good with Haikus but I, personally, dont really know if I could do it lol. I think I've only done one. Anyways, well done on this one!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I like this one a lot more than the last haiku I read. You got the point across in few words and it was beautiful and serene, as I expect a haiku to be. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I thought you did a good job on it. Since it was so short I can't say much but trust me it was a good poem. 5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    Awww
    Drip drop it falls down
    That hit me in some way.. A good way. I really loved this short beauitful piece!
    5/5 B/c I LOVE RAIN

  • 17 years ago

    by Lethmelodis

    Very well done. Liked the fact that the last two lines rhymed :) I dont see much rhyming in Haiku forms. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    This one also sounds cute and my original opinion stil stands with the previous haiku.

    kepp shining :)
    5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I guess you like rains =D anyway it was a beautiful Haiku, well done. I really like the 2nd line in this Haiku. keep up the good work!