by Veamm
Excellent! |
by MaSkEdSoUl
This was a really good poem. Good choice of words. Very well written. You seem to be good with Haikus but I, personally, dont really know if I could do it lol. I think I've only done one. Anyways, well done on this one! |
by Cella Bella
I like this one a lot more than the last haiku I read. You got the point across in few words and it was beautiful and serene, as I expect a haiku to be. 5/5 |
I thought you did a good job on it. Since it was so short I can't say much but trust me it was a good poem. 5. |
Awww |
by Lethmelodis
Very well done. Liked the fact that the last two lines rhymed :) I dont see much rhyming in Haiku forms. 5/5 |
This one also sounds cute and my original opinion stil stands with the previous haiku. |
by Marc Ortiz
I guess you like rains =D anyway it was a beautiful Haiku, well done. I really like the 2nd line in this Haiku. keep up the good work! |