Figure Skating [Haiku]

Great topic. Its interesting and of relateable, yet sticks to the traditonal nature theme. The second line is a bit contarversial. The verb tenses don't match up exactly, mixing up the flow. However, despite this it is very well written.

{5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

Grr.. I wish I can skate.. anyway you really painted a clear picture in my mind. Good job!

That was really clever and cute it made me smile.
xD
Thanks agian for commenting on my poems.
I've been feeling sort of disappointed because so many people read my poems but they never comment or vote! But now nearly all my poems have at least one vote and comment :)

Haikus I find are very hard to mould into something great because they aren't too descriptive and are too simple. Sort ofd ironic that something so simple to the eye is so complex to master and produce. :)
Great work 5.5

Im not a haiku person but this was very good... it was short {lol like its suppose too be} but it was beautiful!

Keep it up!

Oh that was cute. I'm not a big haiku person but you did it a good job on it. 4.