Excellent!

for this one, i can say its unique, why even it is short it had describe the thoughts well. thats great!

keep it up!

I think this said enough, personally. 5/5

Excellent word choice. I really like this one, I've only been ice skating once and I like. Very well written keep it up!

A nicely written haiku. The middle line seems a little off to me, I think it's the use of the word, "and". In such a small poem, replacing it with a word thats more descriptive would be more effective. Overall, it's a good haiku and it's cute. :] 5/5

marcella

Oh that was cute. I'm not a big haiku person but you did it a good job on it. 4.

Im not a haiku person but this was very good... it was short {lol like its suppose too be} but it was beautiful!

Keep it up!

That was really clever and cute it made me smile.
xD
Thanks agian for commenting on my poems.
I've been feeling sort of disappointed because so many people read my poems but they never comment or vote! But now nearly all my poems have at least one vote and comment :)

Haikus I find are very hard to mould into something great because they aren't too descriptive and are too simple. Sort ofd ironic that something so simple to the eye is so complex to master and produce. :)
Great work 5.5

Grr.. I wish I can skate.. anyway you really painted a clear picture in my mind. Good job!

Great topic. Its interesting and of relateable, yet sticks to the traditonal nature theme. The second line is a bit contarversial. The verb tenses don't match up exactly, mixing up the flow. However, despite this it is very well written.

{5/5}

[PygmyPuff]