The first stanza made me expect rhyming but since the other two didn't I'm going to say that they just so happened to rhyme. It really reminds me of traumatic stress disorder under the terms of war. It was a pretty good poem. 4,

This was wonderful. It flowed really nicely.
I really love the way you write your poems, You have a different style and it's awesome! Very original! 5/5

~Kristina

It was a short and very powerful read. The flow was flawless nad the imagery created was vivid and the piece a lot of depth. 5/5

marcella

Nicely written great poem
you have done a great job. keep it up

Powerful! Your style is intriguing.
The last bit concluded well. A topic
well worth writing about. Good message.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

WOW!!! This poem is so true and you wrote it powerfully. Topic is great and idea of whole piece is amazing. Imagery is also good. You should be proud on this one!