Wow this is really sad, but i liked it a lot. i'm sure a lot of people can relate to this, i can i definitely can. you did a really great job on writing it 5/5

That was absoutely awesome. Really powerfully written, the wording was really well used and the flow was flaless.
Such an amazing job
Love always,
Tara-Kay
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Very good poem...like the description...

Excellent poem, sad , but even sadder to know that we have thoughts like that in our minds, you did a wonderful job on a well written poem, k4eep it up,,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

Fantastic job!
the first stanza really hooked me.

depression is in many ways like a monster that feeds on your body, into it deteriorates into nothing.

I few months ago, I was gonna kill myslef because I was so depressed from being lonely. I know how it feels.

but God pulled me out, I love him.

(I've already said too much.)
5/5!

Very good, very good indeed. I have been down that path, and if I hadn't had the friends that I did when it happened, I wouldn't be here right now.

Wow this was sad

Wow... this is a really good poem. i really like it.... i think this is one of my favorite poems.... if u need anyothers commented let me know.

Just to let you all know I'm not actually depressed I just wrote it.

It was sad..
But beautiful..
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I like the personification in this piece..the way you made depression have those moster qualities as if it was alive..that a really good idea. It makes the poem interesting. Also, you imagery and choice of words was very well done.

"It Swallows All My Happiness,
And Drains My Heart Of Hope,
Then It Smashes At My Inner Strength,
And It Chokes Me With A Rope"

^I loved that stanza. Your description is just amazing. Over all it was a great poem..a very enjoyable read. keep it up! =]
--Viola

I know the feeling .
Don't like it much . But one day you will wake up and relize that you can befit this monster.
I know i did.
Fine something that makes you happy and don't let it go.
Good poem.
LIke it alot.
5/5

~Billy

Wow! I really felt tht.
I think I know how you feel.
The monster of depression is an ugly thing.

Wowwys
that was amzing <333

This is frightening but realy good. Good job!

This peice is breathtaking.

The emotion's are so vivid, the word's powerful. This peice really hit me, you really captured was depression feel's like.
Awesome job.
5/5 For a strong Peice:)

-Elly.

WOW.. simply amazing.. i really really love the ending.. it was perfect.. the whole poem was perfect.. and soooo powerful.. excellentttt job..

This poem was amazing.
so amazing no words could possibly describe
how amazing i think it is!
def. 5/5.

Very painfull and strong, well written and I hope this isnt actually something still on your mind. Cuz You know you are better then him. Its hard and I know at times u can have crazy thoughts!!

I think this is a really powerful peom and i love it. Keep writing cause you have a great talent