I loved it , said so much in just a few words, I know about abuse, and I know how it affects you and sometimes makes life harder than it should, great write , and thanks for sharing,,,,,,,,,,,,,your friend Tracy d 5/5

Yes very super awesome.

Powerfully written, you expressed many things with just a few words and you added greatly described emotions to the effective atmosphere. It is really good piece, topic is also very deep and meaningful.

With just a few words you have made a great impact on me.

Abuse is a really terrible thing good job.. You should read my to abuse poems (what he did and r.i.p danielle poem two) Id really appreciate it if you commented them... abuse is not fun i know physical or mental abuse =( but oh well i guess

Short but so powerful..5/5

Abuse is horrible, you said alot in your short poem, for me abuse is just another word for life, but your message if more people read could probably change that for many people
-excellant poem

Simple poem but very powerful meaning. people should not be abused. 5/5

Great Poem!! SO meaninful with so little words...I agreee with Josh u did a GREAT job

Such meaning in so few words. People should be aware of abuse in all its forms. Good job.

Short, but extremely effective.
Easily relatable, fantastic work :]

Very powerful and intense. Very deep message behind these words too. Excellent work. 5/5

Very truthful and emotional piece. Abuse in any form is torture. 5/5, Em

Simply excellent 10/5