Nice poem i enjoyed it

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This is Excellent... Really great job girl do you mind if i use this at school for something...

That was really great. i loved the way you compared soldiers fighting for our country to you fighting for your lover. excellent poem. it made me think. also, thank you so much for your comment.

B. Bridges
*lets change this world*

Im back & I realy enjoyed this poem. I give you 5/5

That sums up war which is hard for people who have never had a loved one go to war for their country............................definate 5/5

I really love this one.. zI think you did great as the poem its self but you really put the picture in our minds an in a way we all can compare...