by Christina Yap Sep 17, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
She slept long and endless |
by Marc Ortiz
Well it was an okay poem I think you did a good job on this one. I have one suggestion.. try to organize the structure of this poem. |
by Cella Bella
I'm sure I really get this one, I mean to some aspect I understand... it seems as if there's more to say here. It may just be me. Nonetheless, a good poem. |