An idealised vision into something that happens so frequently, and yet never a truer word spoken. Well done, on a portrayal of something that is, unfortunately, so common. xx

This is very emotional and sends out a powerful message.... beautifully written and touches the heart. Its a shame how true this is for so many out there! Well done.

What a truely wonderful piece you have written. The sadness is overwhelming.

Free as the bird that flew overhead,
Free as the sea, so wild,
If only they could stop for a while,
And see through the eyes of their child.

This stanza really touched my heart.
Excellent job!
Take care Cindy