I love how you're unique and use such detail in your work

And the rest of the world wants to hear your story :]
Your writing is amazing, it blew me away.

Oh wow.
this is really good.
and so true !

"I don't think God gave us a rose with a thorn to show us that not everything is perfect,
But rather,
He gave us a thorn with a rose,
To show that if you look through the pain of the thorn,"

i loved that part of the stanza and how you wrote it.

i liked how every stanza kinda linked onto the next one really really well.
it was super good !
5/5

Pretty good one. Like it!!!

It was long but it did not bore me so that means it was AWSOME!hehe really nice job!