Pain

by Invisible Shadow   Sep 18, 2007


A Locked Door,
A Rusty Razer,
A Towel Stained With Red,
A Folded Note On The Floor,
A Broken Mirror,

A Young Girl Lays There Dead,
Her Emotions In A Tangle,
The Room Begins To Swirl,
She Was Mom's Perfect Angel,
She Was Daddy's Little Girl.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    I really like the rhyme of the last line, very sad but effective. I like the repetition in the first stanza too. Another great write,

    Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Thats a very ssad poem and I hope it never happen to you aor anyone you know , thats not the way to deal with you personal problems or family prolems, learn to deal with life , because it never gets any easier , unless you make it that way m great job , keep it up, your friend atarcy d 5/5

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