Thats a very ssad poem and I hope it never happen to you aor anyone you know , thats not the way to deal with you personal problems or family prolems, learn to deal with life , because it never gets any easier , unless you make it that way m great job , keep it up, your friend atarcy d 5/5

I really like the rhyme of the last line, very sad but effective. I like the repetition in the first stanza too. Another great write,

Em xXx