The rythm is spot on, and the format is really interesting. i like this a lot, and hope to see more from you. i'd love to read more from you, so PM me to tell me you've got new stuff, if you want comments!

Great poem ,very deep and sad , just the thoughts of the sits and cuts , hurts my mind much less my body,,, well written poem, great job ,,, keep it up
Your friend Tracy d,,,,,,,,,,,5/5

I love this poem... as great forwards as it is back. ^.^