Forever

by HaileyHelen   Sep 18, 2007


Forever seems too long
To be without you
Forever seems too long
To not know what to do

Forever is too long
To not have anything
Forever is too long
To be without my wings

Forever seems too long
To hold a shattered heart
Forever seems too long
If this is just the start

Forever is too long
To stay ripping at the seams
Forever is too long
To have nothing but broken dreams

Forever seems too long
to hold a shattered soul
Forever seems too long
To be detached from whom i know

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  • 17 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Another great of your repetition poems. Another poem of things I fear. Great job. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    Interesting. i liked it alot.it had a wonderful flow and rythm. if i could id give it a 7/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by robin milford

    Great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by ephemera

    Wow, I can honestly say this is the best poem I've read today. It is compelling. I was drawn right into the anguish and sadness. You did a terrific job.

    -Astryd

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    an awesome poem, I like that you repeat the title in every stanza, its a nice effect. the flow is good and I enjoyed reading your poem. 5/5
    kisses stephanie

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