Nice poem!

i love it!

i felt the darkness inside it!

Wow, dark love poem... Very unique, I like it a lot. The choice of words in it is great, and the atmosphere that you created through the piece is so dark and haunting. Whole poem contains very vivid imagery, too. The ending is really powerful and effective.
Keep up, 5/5 from me

Excellent poem, dark and sad, but well written simply a beautiful piece, great job, keep it up ,, your friend Tracy d 5/5

This was such an emotional piece, I read it a few times and it just got better everytime. You truly have talent my dear. great job. Timothy r

Its amazing how something so tragic can create such a beautiful piece, you have a lot of emotion in this one, keep up the good work!

Heyy...
that's a really good poem.
The word usage was really good, because the way you described every stanza made the words come to life.
Really beautiful =]