Omg!!!!! honestly!!!! thats one of the best poems i have ever read, its amazing! its so honest and just the flow you have got going and everything. it is so inspiring to hear this story. its excellent, hope all is ok and works out for you, please write more, well done, thanks x

WOW now that was good i never read the long ones but this one had me hooked and it was a great ryme and set out just right well done 5/5

Omg i love this! so well written! its amazing! i just kept reading and reading lol really kept me sucked in. great choice of words and wonderful descriptions, nothing over the top so it made this just more perfect. loved reading this, wheres the rest? and is this made up or from real life expreinces?

Are you the hooker aish? jokes jokes well done, and you've got like full marks for all your poems! you're smart inside and out of school! LOL

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!! i really liked this poem its very good keep ur head up high!!!

Such a sad story with a (hopefully) happy ending.
This is by far the longest poem I have everhad the pleasure to read.