Thanks for the comment i know how u get that too Its just that it stages of what i felt The first paragraph is how i am now

The second paragraph is the very beginning of the relationship

the third paragraph was the middle of our relationship

and the fourth is what i see when i look at you and what i see when i look in the mirror now

lol yes i know this poem is selfish lol

Lol, the poem isn't selfish libby, it was great, a little saddening but overall, it was awesome, i have to agree with celtic rose though it does go from awesome to hang on as if there is more you wanted to say. but loved it 5/5