Comments : The smile

  • 17 years ago

    by kIROS DELA VEGA

    I love how you're unique and use such detail in your work

  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow amazing write,
    keep it up!
    -Lisa

  • 16 years ago

    by Abu3li

    Brilliant

    i liked its simplicity mixed with meaningfulness

  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    Very good

  • 16 years ago

    by Dian PH

    HAHA XEMPRE AZTIG AKO HAHA PA ENGLISH ENGLISH KAPA EH PARES NAMAN TAUNG PINOY... HAHA, BURGER NA YAN!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    A simple smile can say so much for all to see.

    A simple poem such as this one makes that smile multiply for all who read it.

    I think I will take this smile with me until
    I find someone who needs it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    The imagery in this poem is beautiful.
    It is short but vey very sweet.
    Great job