I relate to this poem, its so well written from the heart and honest, i wrote a poem similar to this for a teacher at school. well done. really good job honey xxxxxxx

Wow that was divinely written.Great job that was sad that u couldnt reach out, trust me i can totally relate to that.5/5= )

That was truly amazing. I felt so sad when I was reading it and I can tell that you wrote it from the heart. =]

I read this one like a fast paste song lol It's really neat I liked it alot :) We're all sorry about alot of things. And we all never want to let anyone know the real us. Great poem/ lyric ;) 5/5

Wow. thats a very honest poem. i love the way it's written and how it speaks the truth but still seems subtle.
5/5
aish
xxx

You handled all the emotions really well. it is very well written.
keep writing!
dani

That was very well written
5/5
Akito

WOW IT"S AMAZING!!
It is very good.

This is an amazimg poem i enjoyed reading it

thanks for the comment :]

Heh, the funny thing is, I can relate to this..
Its really a well put-together poem and very well structured.

I really enjoyed reading it and felt some sort of connection. =)

Good job, Divinity.

Write on!
-Eclipse

This poem is very well written, the flow and structure was flawless. I can def relate to this one! This was a great piece in showing your emotions! Well done!!