Venomous Addictions

Actually, this is very good.
Your lines are very descriptive, painting a very detailed picture for the reader.

It flows very smoothly throughout and I only have a couple suggestions to bring it to a higher level.

Alcohol consumed on lips taste bitter
^
if you want to use those exact words, then "taste" needs to be "tastes"

Here are a couple other ways it could be said:
Alcohol stained lips taste bitter
Lips stained with alcohol taste bitter
Alcohol comsumed - lips taste bitter

The Bathroom door slams open and shut
^
Bathroom door slams loudly shut

I was going to comment that the next line doesn't fit the rhyme scheme that you have set up, but I suppose some people may pronounce "secret" more with an "ut" than an "it", if so, then it's fine.

Great work!

~Ann

5//5

Heyy very powerful piece i liked the words uve used to explain urself xx

I loved the description in this poem..it gave me a vivid picture and made it that much more enjoyable to read...excellent!

Brooke<3

I can totally understand this ... it explains me so well... alwasy on shit ... just to run away from problems good work