by Cindy Sep 18, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Where is the one that made me whole, |
by Nebula
A wonderful write Cindy, well done. I enjoyed the flow. An easy read and the emotions and pain come through nicely... |
by RxQueen
That was so dope thanks!!! |
Excellent poem , well written and very sad, I hate to feel that way, but to be honest I do , loved the poem was great and these lines got me,,, |
by Kaz
Hmm.. isnt it painfull wen sum1 leaves u just like tht.. feel so betrayed.. very relatable to me.. my own story.. well your poem is really awesome.. the way u express is amazing.. i cn really relate it to myself.. beatifully penned downn.keep it up |
ItS lovely! indeeD a lovelY penneD 5/5 |