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  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats a powerful poem with a sad emotion behind it, keep it up x

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaz

    Wow really beautiful poem.. ver well written tracy.. u srsly bring out the reality ..every wrd .. cn be felt.. understood.. just so beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This piece is filled with pain and sadness, it's so touching...
    You can pass the emotions to the readers excellently.
    This poem is really sad yet so greatly written, with good wording and excellent rhyming scheme.
    My favorite lines are:

    -blaming myself for trouble I caused as a child
    maybe it was because they found me to be wild
    an animal from the forest no one wanted
    and that's why my mind always feels haunted-
    ^
    I can relate to those

    Keep writing, 5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    Such a sad write, especially

    "I'll always feel like the beast living alone."

    I just found that particular line heartbreaking.
    Such emotion, sadness mainly with a hint of bitterness and anger. Excellent, the flow, the rhyming and how you got the emotions across perfectly. Excellent write.

    kELLY
    XX

  • 17 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Beautifully penned poem , full of pain and sadness........5/5( Always)......Melody...=)

  • 17 years ago

    by Timothy r

    These thoughts have often crossed my mind on many occasions, I loved every word of it. Thanx for writing it. Timothy r

  • 17 years ago

    by Pamela G

    Beautiful so beautiful that is all I could say.

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Heartbreaking write...great work on this one! keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie

    Very sad and meaningful poem, very good though

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Aww, it's a very nice poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Wow heartbreaking(:
    So sad :/

    Great write darl...
    5/5 for sure

    X

  • 12 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Thanks you for the comment