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by babblingxbrooke Sep 18, 2007 category : Love, romance / desired love
My heart is preparing at the starting line, and as the whistle blows, will I be able to compete with the others? no one yet knows. I start off slow, at a regular pace. but then I remember that this is a race. I want to be the winner, the one to win your heart, but all of the others had a head start. then I see the curve, trying to throw me off track. I round the corner flawlessly and do not dare look back. then in the distance I see a hurtle, I am determined to surpass. I leap with all my might, my blood pumping fast. a little further away I am able to see the finish line. I am about to win my prize, his heart will be all mine. my heart is beating a mile a minute and then I make the worst possible slip, my feet get carried away and in return I trip. I was trampled on, stomped on, left there to cry. I was so determined and had the courage to try, to win over your heart but I failed to cross that line. I was just feet away from making you mine.
by Lisa
Wow great work! keep it up:) -Lisa
by CrossMyHeartAndHopeToDie
Lol this was so cute! i luv the ending even tho it was a sad ending. but i like it a lot
by Kyle
Wow thats a pretty cool poem! im sure i know who its for. lol i like it and i hope you feel better brooke!