Okay. i loved this. i did read it a while back but declined to comment because i wasn't sure my interpretation was correct. however, having come to read it again and seeing your analyzation, i realize that i was. this is beautifully written. the depth and emotion you put into this piece is beautifully done and easily felt by the reader. the imagery you portrayed created very vivid pictures and the flow was good throughout the piece. sadly, i can relate to this. you did a wonderful job with this piece.