Sweet Jeebus I love you, girl..

W0W THiS iS G00D
Y0U WRiTE VERY WELL
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-MiCHELLE
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You have and excellent use of imagery. It's a beautiful poem, and it sounds as if it's really from the heart.

This is a poet after my own heart. I love your style of writing here and enjoy it a lot. This really is my favorite type of poem where the poets heart and emotions flow so well from the poets pen. I could feel the winds of your heart breath in this poem and the pain as well. very nicely done.