This poem was realy nice. realy heart touching poem. i always admire this. wihs you good luck take care5/5

Wow. great. poem

well pam, what if, if you changed your idea a bit for and example:

you would write
when i think of you
i will see your gorgeous smile
i will have feelings of butterfies

and the all stanzas aswell

maybe it would be more romantic

but dear. its you choice. i loved your poem
your friend hassan
take care. wihs you good luck
your work deserve 5/5. take care