Peace

by Veamm   Sep 18, 2007


Peace

Melodic tunes soothes mind
gives treatment to sadness
Devoured forgotten dreams
sink voices with happiness

Some flavoured soft drinks
made to gradtify your taste
Sunbeams conquered shadows
aiding a smile in your face

Satisfaction of fingers
pressing pleasure to you
Encouraging your soul
placing a peace so true

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Your words created clear imagery in this one, I could imagine my own little sceanario while reading this. I enjoyed it, an original concept. Well done. 5/5

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, incredible poem, you created superb atmosphere and it has some special tone that makes it beautiful. Few lines are truly breathtaking, well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Mm. Nicely penned! I really enjoyed the bit about the soft drink. Unique, and well expressed. Lovely!

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    It's so simple. It sounds like something a teenage boy or girl would do after school. They walk out side into the bright light while listening to their MP3 or IPOD (I like to just say MPIPOD :D) and drinking a soda. That's what I got out of it at least. 5 only because I made a little story out of it. If I wouldn't have thought of that it would have gotten a 3 or 4.

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