It's so simple. It sounds like something a teenage boy or girl would do after school. They walk out side into the bright light while listening to their MP3 or IPOD (I like to just say MPIPOD :D) and drinking a soda. That's what I got out of it at least. 5 only because I made a little story out of it. If I wouldn't have thought of that it would have gotten a 3 or 4.

Mm. Nicely penned! I really enjoyed the bit about the soft drink. Unique, and well expressed. Lovely!

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Wow, incredible poem, you created superb atmosphere and it has some special tone that makes it beautiful. Few lines are truly breathtaking, well done!

Your words created clear imagery in this one, I could imagine my own little sceanario while reading this. I enjoyed it, an original concept. Well done. 5/5

Tammie