Awning.

Mmm a short piece :) I like it I like it. Once again an original piece that makes me think as Joe said. I feel your words are simple but they explain a complictaed message. I like how you wrote this. You have such a rare writing style that is easy to spot from anyone else. You are sucha talented lady and it makes me happy to know you. You'll be famous one day I'm sure of it. Keep writing like this and it's bound to happen :) Nik

Spectacular short verse. :) I love short poems, and you have a fresh, yet classic style! I bow to you... ;)

Definately interesting.

Interesting peice, short and makes you think, which is what I like about this peice. Good job. Keep it up.

Peace, Joe